It’s a Wix, probably $14 US a month
First thing – the site must be named. OK, the url is ‘majestiqueservices.com.au ‘ but the name of the site – is ‘Mysite’ (see image) He has to go back into the Wix and change the name
1. Opening Page – Home
” Majestique Services is an Australian, 100% privately owned company that prides itself in providing clients exceptional service.” Needs to have ‘with’ to make it readable
” Majestique Services is an Australian, 100% privately owned company that prides itself in providing clients WITH exceptional service.”
1.Button jump to Company Profile
Doesn’t need the ‘with’ here as the sentence continues into ‘exceptional service delivery with cost competitive packages et.c
“Our Goal You always“? What does that mean? Does it mean that “our goal is always you”? Perhaps it would be better to have “Our Goal – Your Gain’ or something along those lines.
P.S. the text needs to be adjusted so that there aren’t huge gaps in it
2. Cleaning Services
Majestique Cleaning offers comprehensive residential, commercial and retail cleaning services at very fair rates. Our trained, professional and trustworthy staff provides the highest standards of cleanliness and is meticulous in their work. Services on offer include laundry and car washing as well.
Should be ‘Our trained, professional and trustworthy staff provide the highest standards‘. If the noun ‘staff’ is singular, then the verb is ‘provides’ but, if the noun ‘staff’ is plural, then the verb is ‘provide’. In this case the noun is plural. A small thing, yes, but why not have the grammar correct?
We can schedule custom designed services tailored to meet client’s requirements and budgets. Majestique Cleaning full range of cleaning services are available seven days a week and with flexible hours, during office hours or after depending on your convenience.
Needs a comma ‘during office hours or after, depending on your convenience.’ There’s a general confusion about the use of the comma in the text.
At Majestique Cleaning we always try, from the outset to ascertain your needs and requirements. Following a detailed consultation, and site survey, we provide you with a comprehensive proposal together with detailed costings, specific to your individual needs.
Here’s those sentences with the comma confusion corrected
At Majestique Cleaning we always try from the outset to ascertain your needs and requirements. Following a detailed consultation and site survey, we provide you with a comprehensive proposal together with detailed costings, specific to your individual needs.
“Regular maintenance will help ensure your equipment’s are working properly and are less likely to fail or develop faults,
Agggh! What’s that apostrophe doing there? Should be ‘help ensure your equipment is working properly‘
I’d prefer a snappier feel than the current text. What about a slogan? Understanding, Expertise and Experience or a stronger slogan, Expertise, Experience, Excellence